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100 Word Challenge week 21!!

February19

This is a teddy bear with a red ribbon on its neck, claws, and a nose with the mouth attached to its face. This teddy bear with a red ribbon on its neck is on the ground. The ground has a nice wooden or stone texture. This white bear with a ribbon on it is not probably but definitely on the ground because Bob who is a fox (who likes to take pictures of everything) dropped it on the ground for a picture because he wanted to. He was eaten by the fox later because Bob was hungry. The end.

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“100 Word Challenge week 21!!”

  1. February 27th, 2019 at 12:06 am      Reply Jackie Cameron Says:

    This is a very quirky interpretation of the prompt Ruari.
    Your sentence structure and punctuation are perfect.
    Thanks for sharing,
    Jackie (Team 100WC)
    New Zealand


  2. March 4th, 2019 at 8:48 pm      Reply Mrs. Schmidt Says:

    Dear Ruari,
    Great job on your first post! I like how you used specific detail to describe the setting. Maybe the next time you can start it as a fictional story and word those descriptions into the storyline. Keep up the good work!
    Mrs. Schmidt


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